After reading my colleagues' work and sharing ideas, I realized I do not have to do anything to improve my essay. Inside and outside of class, my peers provided wonderful and thoughtful comments about my essay. Ultimately, all ended up saying that my essay had great diction, syntax, organization, and flow. I was also informed by many that my essay met all the needs of writing a persuasive piece including a hook, clear thesis, and parting shot. I am proud of the result. Hope you enjoy reading my essay: A Hug Is Nearly A Gun Spelled Backwards
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